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Tuesday, March 15, 2016

T1, W7, CB - A Conversation between Friends

Learning Intention:
Use dialogue in our writing.


Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
  1. Speech marks.
10/10
10/10
  1. The correct punctuation.
10/10
9.5/10
  1. Start a new line when someone else is talking.
10/10
8/10

Your task is to write a dialogue between the two men in the picture above. Use the clues in the picture to give you an idea of what they could be talking about.


A conversation between friends:
I wonder what the sales will be like today, said Dave.
Yeah . . . hopefully good, said Jake. Then he said Watch out! A rotten tomato was flying through the air, but luckily it hit the water between their boats. BE CAREFUL WHERE YOU’RE THROWING THAT STUFF! they said together.
Then, a short while later, Dave said Look out, the customers are beginning to come!


This is a writing doc.

2 comments:

  1. I like the rotten tomato Christopher. Maybe you could have explained what we were doing in writing a bit more.

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  2. Hi Christopher

    I really liked that part where there was a flying tomato but maybe you could enter down a line when someone is talking

    By Chris
    From Awahono school

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